Whisper or a Shout

chill, uk spoken poetry, jazz, bass and piano, slow · 4:53

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Lyrics

[Verse 1]
There's a runnel of red between the chambers,
born the night the septum failed to seal,
Qp over Qs is the number that matters,
one-point-five to two tips the wheel.
Watch the left side stretch, watch the atrium swell,
feel for that thrill still under your palm,
a susurrus, soft as parchment turning —
that's the murmur's whisper, never quite calm.
Symptoms creeping, failure to thrive,
pulmonary pressure climbing the wall,
is this a whisper or a shout in disguise?
That's the question before you do anything at all.

[Chorus]
Shunt, threat, wait, fit, gate,
five small gates before you operate,
ask the heart what it's trying to say
before you cut, before you weigh.
Shunt, threat, wait, fit, gate,
five decisions, don't be late.

[Verse 2]
Is a leaflet sagging toward the tunnel,
prolapsing down to the aortic door,
watch a whisper turning into thunder,
regurgitation knocking, wanting more.
Guard against endocarditis camping,
vegetations on a turbulent stream,
double-chamber right ventricle cramping,
a pressure trap dividing the dream.
Sometimes a channel sneaks left into atrium,
LV to RA, a Gerbode disguise —
threats can lurk though the shunt looks modest,
read the anatomy, never the size.

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
Small muscular holes in the young and the hopeful
close on their own more often than not,
perimembranous, wrapped in a pouch for a blanket,
aneurysm tissue sealing the spot.
But age is a tide that won't be rewound now,
the older the patient, the slimmer the chance,
so weigh what nature might still be allowed
before you go reaching for scalpel and lance.

[Verse 4]
Rims of tissue, the distance from valve,
decide if a device can nest in that hole —
too close to the aorta, too near the conduction,
surgery answers where catheters stall.
A patch of pericardium, stitched in silence,
or a nitinol disc, released with care —
anatomy chooses the tool for the mending,
not comfort, not habit, but what's really there.

[Verse 5]
Echo windows charting the changes,
years of follow-up, patient and slow,
some holes heal soft in their own quiet ranges,
some need a hand to help the blood flow.
Listen closely, the story keeps turning,
each visit a verse in the same steady song,
the heart holds its secrets, patient, unyielding,
teaching us where we still might be wrong.

[Bridge]
But before you touch a single thread,
ask if the lungs still let blood through —
pulmonary resistance climbing ahead
turns left-into-right to blue-on-blue.
Eisenmenger waits behind that gate,
once it swings open, it won't undo,
so measure the vessels before it's too late —
the window closes if you don't.

[Chorus]

[Outro]
Shunt, threat, wait, fit, gate,
say it slow before you operate,
five small questions, one small hole,
holding the rhythm of the whole.

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